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oh ho ho

She's got 4 arms to play that fighting game with. ;)

Good comic

The boss' fist dialogue bubble should be on the left side, above the main character's speech so the reader doesn't read the second line of the conversation first. Other than that the art is pretty cool man.

Shotgunmadmax responds:

I actually had a time figuring out where I would put those dialogue bubbles, I know what your trying to say but it seems that would look alittle off. A comic reader knows thats a continuation of a dialogue. I just wanted to keep in out of the way and not have them jumbled up. But thank you for your review man.

I make films, draw pictures, occasionally animate, and play video games. I'm a laid back guy and sometimes save villages of frightened robot children from their oppressors.

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